Friday, April 12, 2013

Flash Friday: Work in Progress

Flashes of a Work in Progress

This Flash Friday I have to admit to being stumped for a topic since I've been consumed with the writing job and trying to finish a longer work in progress. I don't want to give away too much, but I thought why not share what I'm working on for people who might be interested.

This will be a short bdsm novel. There won't be any non-consent in it. There's a little reluctance perhaps, depending on your definition.

She pinned him up against the back of the elevator. Their kisses were hot, heavy and the panting filled the space as Chloe slapped at the floor indicator buttons. Finally with a groan, she broke away from the kiss and whispered, "Save my place, so I don't forget."

He chuckled against her skin laying kisses down the side of her neck. He brushed light, blonde waves of her hair out of his way. The spot he was paying attention to made her weak, and her eyes slipped closed before she could hit a button. Hers was the fifth floor of the modest apartment building, but they might not make it to her apartment. Elevator sex sounded fantastic.


I'd love to hear what people think. You can comment about this short excerpt or about anything on my blog. If you'd like to comment anonymously that's fine, too! I'm pretty sure it's set to accept anonymous comments. I don't mind constructive criticism, either, as long as it's polite and not soul-crushing trolls trying to rip out my heart!

Let me know what you think.

2 comments:

  1. I like the gentle aspect of it. I hate when BDSM is portrayed as pain, which of course it can be depending on the individual.

    I will look forward to reading the complete story.

    Am new to blogging and social Media so it's really nice to find you..xx

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    1. Most of my work has pain in it. You just happened to find the excerpt that didn't! That story, Fearful Cravings, has less pain than any of the others.

      You can still hang out if you like! My newness is only now wearing off, so I remember the feeling.

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